The four children (a based-on tale )
Daphne Lee's (book link ) Malaysian tales retold and remixed (my review ) with based-on stories or derivatives etc oir whatever you can say, inspired me on writing a version of a classical children tale.
Below here is a try with just a plot of the story . Please feel free to enjoy reading and advise me which is the story you can identify as 'background' !
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Not long ago a relatively old man had 4 children aged of upper teens He suddenly was caused of a deadly disease . He was a high paid employee , so his children spent their time mostly with their friends and none was involved to any work . So shortly before he passed away he summoned them telling that all have to start earning their money.
The youngest of them , a girl ,started working as a waitress in bars . As she was the laziest of all and relatively fat, she was easily tired . This caused her many times to change to various bars and taverns but always doing the same job as waitress .Simply as most of her employees fired her.
The second youngest child (a boy ) worked as barman . In contrast to his sister he never changed posts . Upon agreement with his boss ,he called his sister to work in his bar .They immediately started a fitness program. In a not very long time the girl was quite fit and worked much better.
The second elder already had a hobby as arts- painter He decided to keep his hobby now for a
In the meantime, the older brother together with some friends started a business As the idea they used was quite pioneering for this village the company flourished quite soon.
IN all of a sudden the boos of the bar was enforced to suspend operations of the bar, firing all the personnel . Among them the two youths which are now jobless.
Hearing this , the elder brother suggested them join into the company. The younger youths started working as sellers and very soon became partners . And the company flourished even higher!!
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That's all .Here i tried to give a plot of the story rather than a full story , with the hope that this version would be more easy to understand.
Thee are many deliberate mistakes (as eg lacking some possibly necessary background ) and possibly some exaggerations just for the simplicity of the text .Notice that i am not a good story teller ,and even , translating this story into English was even more difficult than i could think.Much more than the story of the hen !
Do you recognize the background story which is a very known children tale ???
(just to remind you some of them as Snowhite, Little red riding hood , the wolf and the seven kids ,the goose that lays the golden eggs , three little pigs, Puss in Boots, Gosling etc for this I thank very much Goo translator for th i think exact translation )
Below here is a try with just a plot of the story . Please feel free to enjoy reading and advise me which is the story you can identify as 'background' !
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Not long ago a relatively old man had 4 children aged of upper teens He suddenly was caused of a deadly disease . He was a high paid employee , so his children spent their time mostly with their friends and none was involved to any work . So shortly before he passed away he summoned them telling that all have to start earning their money.
The youngest of them , a girl ,started working as a waitress in bars . As she was the laziest of all and relatively fat, she was easily tired . This caused her many times to change to various bars and taverns but always doing the same job as waitress .Simply as most of her employees fired her.
The second youngest child (a boy ) worked as barman . In contrast to his sister he never changed posts . Upon agreement with his boss ,he called his sister to work in his bar .They immediately started a fitness program. In a not very long time the girl was quite fit and worked much better.
The second elder already had a hobby as arts- painter He decided to keep his hobby now for a
In the meantime, the older brother together with some friends started a business As the idea they used was quite pioneering for this village the company flourished quite soon.
IN all of a sudden the boos of the bar was enforced to suspend operations of the bar, firing all the personnel . Among them the two youths which are now jobless.
Hearing this , the elder brother suggested them join into the company. The younger youths started working as sellers and very soon became partners . And the company flourished even higher!!
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That's all .Here i tried to give a plot of the story rather than a full story , with the hope that this version would be more easy to understand.
Thee are many deliberate mistakes (as eg lacking some possibly necessary background ) and possibly some exaggerations just for the simplicity of the text .Notice that i am not a good story teller ,and even , translating this story into English was even more difficult than i could think.Much more than the story of the hen !
Do you recognize the background story which is a very known children tale ???
(just to remind you some of them as Snowhite, Little red riding hood , the wolf and the seven kids ,the goose that lays the golden eggs , three little pigs, Puss in Boots, Gosling etc for this I thank very much Goo translator for th i think exact translation )
Good story. But lack in style of presentation
ReplyDeleteHello , yes i did . But i think it needs more info. To make it like a ferry tail
ReplyDeletethis was my fist tires to write a story .
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