My wife was a hen!!! (a tale )
UPDATE : below the text has some minor corrections or declarations.
Please notice that very soon the story becomes a serial
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Here I post for the first time a tale of my own.
I Am not a very good penglipur lara but I will try here to post this story . Notice that though I have thought many stories. This is the fist time I post such a story .I hope that you enjoy it !This story is based on some Malay tales and others…
------------------------------ Once upon a time there was a young man called George is a hard working boy as he is very poor . He was alone as his parents have died sometime ago . As most men are untidy he was the same.
Around the house there is a small garden for growing vegetables and a small coop with 7 hens so he had also his dairy eggs, sometimes also selling them.
He was very sad that he did not have so much time to look for a woman to help him .It was more important earn his money to live . One day he thinking to find a way on how to get a woman.
The next day he returned home he was amazed that everything was settled . There was a very smacking meal on the kitchen the house tidy and everything in order.
Same thing happened next day
The third day he pretended to walk outside . After sometime , he returned home and looked at a beautiful black-haired girl tidying up the house . The girl could nt leave the house
George asked her : who are you and how are you here?
Girl :I am Mary and I want to mErry you . Your wishes have been heard this is the reason I am here !
After much discussion with her, has allowed her to live in the house.
Next day he was well amazed that a hen from the coop was missing while he was to fed them .
Mary : yes I am one of these hens !
One day Mary while settling a flower she suddenly was cut from a thorn and a blood drop teared into the soil of the flower . The flower grew more rapidly than usual !
George was very curious looking at it . Mary told him that she is a divine spirit that was embedded inside the hen.
Most of the animals were too friendly to her and came close to her . She had to the power to communicate with them . And one day she caged a small bird into the house.
Another day while feeding her mates in he coop suddenly she again torn a blood from her finger into the grains . The next day the hen who ate it started bearing golden eggs!!! For simplicity she had made the same with the small caged bird. She thought that golden stool could be better help him than a golden egg!! Meanwhile the hen continued to deliver golden eggs.
So Mary was then George's wife . And soon George became a rich man and did courtesy to other poor people of the village , changed his business and renovated his house.
This made the man from the nearby house (a rich man ) being jealous with the hen of golden eggs stolen her . But was very nervous that stopped bearing golden eggs!!
Teddy's intentions (the name of the neighbor ) were more nastier. Once for the prefect occasion he grabbed her and isolated her in a room in his house with the door locked .
Mary and Betty (the rich man's wife) were close friends . But Teddy kept the key with him. Mary found another more smart idea on how to leave the house. As there was a gap in the bottom door she transformed into a speed lizard , passed through the gap , bitten the heel of Betty with a low poison venom and left the house.
Betty was then sick after this bite . Many doctors have been passed without finding a treatment .
Next days after that, Mary offered her a herbal drug and drink as remedy . After sometime Betty was healed. So Teddy begged for apologies.
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And here the story ends !
If you want something more , the hen still bear golden eggs and Mary was more than happy to offer some eggs to Teddy after everything settled. Mary was also famous in the village for her charity
As you will see this can be found as silly , funny or quite missing . Don't forget this is just a tale , poor tale! I think also that the language is quite poor as the story
If you have any comments (and you surely will have I am sure !)please leave them here .
I1ve read the story hen and foun it very nice.
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ReplyDeleteI think this tale is based on animism, and so this might create a problem to someone who does not believe in animism. I am one of these people. I do not hate or despise animals, but I do not think treating animals well necessarily makes a man wealthy. Maybe happy and caring, but not necessarily wealthy.
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